Evaluation of our Preliminary Task

What have you learnt by doing this exercise?
I have learnt that when doing something like this again I need to make sure my acting is much better as it looks very awkward and doesn't look realistic at all in the preliminary task. I have learnt that I need to practise on my editing skills as the scenes cut very quickly and the music cuts off very quickly and I think it would have looked and sounded alot better and effective. I have also learnt that when you are filming things you have to plan alot more than expected as if not you waste a lot of time on deciding silly things.

What skills have you developed?
I have developed the skill to edit things together, as I used to have no idea how to do this but once I got taught how to edit I found it a lot easier as I did before. I still need to improve my editing skills quite a bit though as theyre not great yet.

What feedback have you recieved? (If you publish to YouTube then other members of the group can leave feedback as comments and a few screen shots of this could provide this evidence).
These are the comments that we got on our preliminary task.

How would you improve your preliminary task?
I could improve my preliminary task by improving the acting, making sure it looks more professional and realistic. I would improve the editing a lot more by making sure the scenes dont cut off quickly and it flows more. I could also improve by mkaing sure the music fades out and sounds better than it does now.